Crit on Personal Project Propsal

Today we had a quick crit with Neil about our initial ideas for our learning proposal.

Here was (was being the key word here) first idea:

To re brand the Boatshed Cafe In Penzance and create a series of commercial print items such as menus, posters and logo.

It was agreed on that that idea did not have enough depth, and that I could do better.

here are some more ideas to add to the 'pot'

1. Make a book
2. Create a experimental self promotion piece.
3. Enviromental issues
4. Create new brand for something in the future

I am hoping that from this is i will be able to create something better then the first idea and something that i find stimulating and a bit of a challenge.